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Critical Analysis #2

What is Love?

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-06-08 06:40 PM

What is love?
Love is being thruthful and kind.
What is love?
Not having peoples faults in mind.

What is love?
Being gentle to the one you love.
What is love?
Not giving up hop when things are bad.
What is love?
When you talk out problems and make-up.
What is love?
Not letting the bad out weigh the good.

What is love?
When you give up the one you love for your betterment and his.
What is love?
When you are happy he found somebody new.
What is love?
Love is what makes life worth living even if it isn`t.
What is love?
Love is what keeps us alive.

What is love?
Love lasts forever and never dies.
What is love?
Love lasts beyond death.
What is love?
Love is something none of us can live without no matter how many times we are burned.

Now what really is love?
Love is what we all want so bad even if it takes years to find that special one.

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

1 posted 2002-06-10 12:38 PM

What are you trying to do here?

Are you sure you want critical appraisals of this?

renathon
Junior Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 23

2 posted 2002-06-10 01:09 AM

I truthfully do not want to be rude. But did you really mean to post in a place where you are going to receive serious criticism?

The poem reminds me of those you get in your e-mail after some tragedy. I seriously am trying NOT to be rude. I'm sorry if this offends you, I never wish to make enemies.

My opinion doesn't matter anyway, I'm no great poet.

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

3 posted 2002-06-10 09:50 AM

"I don't mean to be rude, BUT. . ." What is that if not rude?

[This message has been edited by Not A Poet (06-10-2002 10:10 AM).]

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

4 posted 2002-06-10 12:39 PM

And what does that mean?

It means you don't like the poem.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

5 posted 2002-07-07 08:02 AM

I won't critizise this poem, I only want to answere the question: "What is love",

"Love is a verb!"

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