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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
Love is lost When love is broken Broken when torn Torn when left alone Left alone Love is lost Love is pain When love is taken advantage off Not seeing what it does to me Kills me slowly Left to die Love is pain Love is sadness When I sit here and cry Cry because you are not here You are not here To show you love me too Love is sadness Love is dead When You Die Inside |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
like all of your other poems, this one shows your emotions wonderfully and makes the reader feel for you. the words have been used to fantastic effect, especially the last stanza, when the poem sort of dies off, it sorta shows the dying of the speaker great work!~ |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
oh yes, i forgot to say: i love it hope u feel better after writing this and not so depressed, and great work!  |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Your starting from the wrong premise. Work from what made you feel this, not explain the feeling. |
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