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punksmurf Junior Member
since 2002-01-01
Posts 37new hampshire, U.S. |
and they are nothing but Beautiful wasps having sex everyone knows that they will only end up both dead one imbeding its venom into the other and dying nothing but beautiful wasps but so beautiful that ticking of a clock would never bring them away from the glam and glitter ice world they could make sharp words Beautiful muscles in a mixing lost love, but before its origin following the words away doesn't solve it anymore so Beautiful wasps, sting and loveleavehateragepainsting the bright lights you wanted blind you now and if i could hold your Beautiful wasps, and findkeep a lover who would trace my face with his soft hands prove to me that i'm real because only blood is there tonight and nothing i see is here because nobody is all of the Beautiful Wasps together alone, me hold your head in my hands fly away, stinger deep in my flesh at least i got a piece of someone |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there, I've read this many times and I think it's fantastic. There may have been moments that swerved the reading and train of thought and images, though I think this is why I liked it. Kind of off the wall ideas/images sewn into this deep and infecting feeling. Opening with "and" _and_ with a lower case "a" kind of makes me wonder what came before this, what the beginning was, of what seems to be a second half to something. I don't know, overall though, I'm glad to have read it. Some incredibly pleasing pieces,... "they could make sharp words Beautiful muscles in a mixing" "and if i could hold your Beautiful wasps, and findkeep a lover who would trace my face with his soft hands prove to me that i'm real because only blood is there tonight and nothing i see is here because nobody is all of the Beautiful Wasps together alone, me" *Peace. |
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