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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore

0 posted 2001-05-11 07:56 AM




this is how i feel sometimes.....many a time when i feel so alone, a part of me actually dies......
this was inspired by the sone 'At Your Side' by The Corrs
love, chinese gal
michelle

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when the daylight's gone
and i'm on my own
when i'm sick and scared
when i'm desperate

no one comforts me
no one understands
they all think i'm tough
they don't understand

days are lonely
nights are so sad
i keep up with society
but i'm tired and shag

my tears have somewhat
seem to flow dry
now all that's left of my heart
is but an empty shell

the things and people
whom i love
they all let my down
they're always not around

its getting awfully cold
even in broad daylight
i guess its dying
this flame of my life

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2001-05-11 10:23 AM


This is scary.  I guess I have never felt that way.  Even though I have suffered some very tragic losses, I have not lost myself.  Love to you Michelle and maybe your writing will be your safety line.  Joyce
dr tung
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55
singapore
2 posted 2001-06-12 03:29 AM


hey michelle, this is realy a heart braeking poem...
well guess life's journey is always tough and sometimes we're left so lost and helpless.

as a christian, i believe that god has everything planned out for us, and there's a reason to everything.
hope u'll be strong and enjoy more happy times than sadness... alvin

nicolette
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 42
St. Paul, Minnesota
3 posted 2001-07-28 01:01 AM


you put my feelings into words...beautiful poem
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