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Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19
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The Vagabond Sea

0 posted 2001-05-08 11:19 PM


Am I free
   the double edge
   to cutting lonliness
Am I dead
   it can not be
   death must be more full
Perhaps
   I am merely
        unbreakable

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
1 posted 2001-05-09 01:24 AM


unnerving but it was meant to be
or thats what i feel
and very well put i might add
i like your writing as well
the right words in a small spaces
can say more than
a million that waste space
hope you are unbreakable
will look forward to reading more from you, red_feather

mistyrose~*

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2 posted 2001-05-09 02:54 AM


I hope that you are more than that.  Thought provoking verses.  Joyce
Trillium
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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2001-05-09 12:24 PM


Red_Feather:  Unbreakable could also mean you are eternal!

Betty Lou Hebert

~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
4 posted 2001-05-09 01:44 PM


the thought of being unbreakable is inspiring. this is a good one. thank you for sharing.
~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
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in your dreams
5 posted 2001-05-09 01:45 PM


the thought of being unbreakable is inspiring. this is a good one. thank you for sharing.
coyote
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

6 posted 2001-05-09 08:18 PM


Go ahead and break,
for in the pieces,
you will find the ones,
that really matter.

Good to see ya back.
Thanks, Billy  

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19
Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea
7 posted 2001-05-10 12:58 PM


Thanks all for reading and responding...and for noticing i was gone. I have missed it here. I was trapped under the sickly green weight of all the almighty dollars that i do not have and everyone else suddenly decides they need...right now...or else...bla..bla..bla..

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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