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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-08 04:54 PM


It started as a usual day,
My friend and I decide to shop,
We stared at few toys
And decided to cop,

Inside the store we planned,
The details were in place,
We rehearse the plan,
While we untied our lace,

I took them one a time,
Stuffing them down,
Leaving no traces,
Not this time around,

One by one we did our part,
Walking through the store,
Now one thing was left to do,
exiting through the door,

As I stepped out the door,
I felt a relief,
My friend right behind me,
Confirm my belief,

Two paces away,
A hand I felt,
My head turn left,
As I saw the belt,

My eyes rolled up,
Meeting their match,
The guard stopped us,
And that’s the end of that.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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Trillium
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1 posted 2001-05-08 06:29 PM


Are you in jail??

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2001-05-08 10:17 PM


Nay, a "slap on the wrist" i say.
The humiliation is enough for most.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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3 posted 2001-05-08 10:53 PM


A lesson well learned?  Joyce
Xeonox
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4 posted 2001-05-09 01:04 AM


No, trillium, I am not in a jail. It is a lesson learned well though. I was caught shoplifting toy cars whenI was young.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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5 posted 2001-05-09 01:48 PM


i understand.
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