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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2001-05-06 02:41 PM


You're so sweet
you taste like honey.
You're so pretty,
smart, and funny

and sexy in
your snakeskin pants.
you sing so well
and you can too dance.

You're warm to the touch,
and silky soft to feel.
I pinch myself;
"Can you be real?"

Then a kiss from your lips
proves my thoughts to be true:
I have never-ever met
another girl like you.

DEDICATED TO MELISSA NORRIS

~DreamChild~
The Lover


© Copyright 2001 derrick gillum - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2001-05-07 02:30 AM


cute poem.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-05-07 05:52 PM


oooo, how many are there?  lucky girls!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2001-05-07 06:15 PM


You do get around don't you.I get the feeling that you admire this one for certian things- but as much as the other!
            David

shadydaze
Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85

4 posted 2001-05-08 03:50 PM


another good one. i admire your ability to portray such romntic feelings so vividly. thanks.
mistyrose
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
5 posted 2001-05-08 04:01 PM


still reading my curiosity building
where is this going
cant wait for pt. 3
what a cool idea

mistyrose~*

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