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PortuguesePoet
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since 2001-04-24
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0 posted 2001-05-06 08:22 AM



Hope glistens where despair reigns,
A solitary spark
Amidst a sea of gloom.
It shines like a beacon
And glitters like a dream,
Where once none existed,
A promise has been born.
It becons me, come closer
And tells me not to cry,
The past is forgotten,
The future left to forge.
I lift my head in wonder,
The dawn is come anew,
The dark is finally breaking.
The morrow,
A new day!


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2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-05-06 08:51 AM


...The past is forgotten,
The future left to forge.


I like it.
Melton

Joyce Johnson
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Washington State
2 posted 2001-05-06 11:24 AM


THERE you go.  That's better.  Joyce
~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
3 posted 2001-05-06 02:51 PM


a great read!
Anyone can identify with this poem at some point in life. you describe it so well.
    
                        Thanks!
                         ~DreamChild~

        

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
4 posted 2001-05-06 09:31 PM


Yes.. the other side of the coin. You write very well. I hope to see more of your poems.
mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
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state of anxiety
5 posted 2001-05-09 08:37 PM


great job!!!!!
thanks for sharing
the other side

mistyrose~

Denise
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6 posted 2001-05-09 09:03 PM


Very nicely done!
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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
7 posted 2001-05-10 08:14 PM


Hope sees us through so many troubled times. Well written.

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
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King of Prussia, PA USA
8 posted 2001-05-13 02:49 AM


Just exactly what my weary heart needed to hear....thank you

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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