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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-05-06 06:43 AM


Finally it's Spring
and I've planted the garden
glorious feeling
Love is the greatest blessing
then the joy of a garden

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-05-06 06:49 AM


Your work is done. Now, reap the rewards.
Melton

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2 posted 2001-05-06 11:25 AM


Right on!!! Joyce
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3 posted 2001-05-06 12:33 PM


I really likied this tanka! Great job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
4 posted 2001-05-06 02:47 PM


short, simple, and sweet.
your poem here is a delightful treat.
thanx 4 sharing.
                    always caring,
                      ~DreamChild~

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5 posted 2001-05-06 11:11 PM


Ellie~


In rapture of Spring
Loveliest flowers you bring
Forth from the garden
Laying a lovely bouquet
Right before our very eyes


Lovely ... thanks for the inspiration~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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6 posted 2001-05-07 11:48 AM


the simple pleasures of life...thank you for this
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