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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-06 01:55 AM


I wander through the woods of Amazon,
the ground suffocated in leaves,
as I breathe the fresh air,
I revisit centuries,
to the time of Romans,
and the time of enchantment,

I walk onward without any care,
ageless beauty with nature-
I share,

here I am reminded of dragons-
and elf's-
of unicorn
and Prometheus,

this is not fictional,
for I see the trees,
all surround me,
like a darkening sheath,

As I continue my pace,
I meet few friends,
they've been filled in
on the little details,

I volunteer to be the guide
my companions enjoying the journey,

Just over the mountain,
I spot the opening,
we enter the cave-
with minds of warriors,

I held out my hand,
to catch the drip
through the fissures of my hand,
it sneakily slips,

The adventure doesn't end,
but I must sleep,
for a write such a this,
takes a lifetime to complete.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-06 02:18 AM


Very imaginative.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-05-06 03:07 PM


good poem. i liked it very much. especially the fantastic imagery such as elves, and prometheus.
Xeonox
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3 posted 2001-05-06 09:07 PM


THanks you for your comments. I know the poetry is long, but I wanted to try something long and keep it interesting.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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4 posted 2001-05-06 09:59 PM


I hope this adventure will continue!  Will watch for the next chapter.

Betty Lou Hebert

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