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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-04-28 01:45 PM


This saturday morning in April,
I am here with my daughter,
Laura

Listening
as she learns to play guitar.
She is intent,
and learning beautifully.

There is a moment here,
a moment suspended
in musical time.

A musical moment,
of a mothers heart.
Gazing
in wonderment,
at my beloved child,
a symphony,
a song of joy,
sung
with the heartstrings
of a mothers love.


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 04-28-2001).]

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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-04-28 01:52 PM


HOw inciteful of you, to recognize these moments as they are happening.  Lovely poem.
Joyce

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2001-04-28 04:29 PM


What precious moments they are when we look at our child and know they are a miracle. Lovely poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety
3 posted 2001-04-28 05:25 PM


your love...pride...awe...shown
in such a lovely way
in this poem
things only a mother
can really know
good job!

mistyrose~*

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
Ontario,Canada
4 posted 2001-04-28 11:01 PM


beautiful thoughts here Ellie....the love is  the foundation and the n music the catalyst for building......nice poem.

jack

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
5 posted 2001-05-01 11:38 AM


A mother's love..what can be more beautiful..lovely Ellie.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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