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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-04-25 06:48 PM


Let me pierce your mind,
One thought at a time,
I creep closer to your memories,
Leaching them of  any records,
You just sit there and enjoy this poem,
While I gather the rest.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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1 posted 2001-04-25 07:43 PM


Wow, You leave my mind alone.  It' going fast enough.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-25 09:57 PM


Ha Ha. Joke's on you. Wife says, "Nothing there".
Melton

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3 posted 2001-04-26 12:43 PM


Thank your for your comical responses.  

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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4 posted 2001-04-26 05:56 PM


While you are reading my mind
let me know if something you find.
Been said nothing's there
So better beware
My brain was left way behind.

Jack

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5 posted 2001-04-26 10:38 PM


creepy piece...never thought of poetry as that way..good read..i wonder if my mind has already been brainwashed by the poems i read?
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6 posted 2001-04-26 10:38 PM


er, wanna add this to my library
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7 posted 2001-04-27 01:31 AM


Your responses are overwhelming my friends.   Thank you for letting me in your mind. LOL

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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