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mistyrose
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-04-25 11:56 AM


it's an obstacle illusion
to think that
love is merely more than
a delusion
created
for romantics~like me
it's an obvious intrusion
to cling to
a heart that doesnt
need delusions
to live
it's flirting with the impossible
its crying on the wrong shoulder
loving you,
its like falling without a net
or
your arms to catch me....~*



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1 posted 2001-04-25 03:57 PM


I hope you land on your feet!  I enjoyed the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2001-04-25 07:09 PM


Interesting read.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
3 posted 2001-04-25 07:40 PM


Be caredful.  This was fun though.  Joyce
twinsgd
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Ontario,Canada
4 posted 2001-04-26 06:50 PM


Good poem Mistyrose...as they say..no pain, no gain.

jack

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