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no time to spare

shadydaze
Member

since 2000-10-02

Posts 85

0 posted 2001-04-16 08:47 PM

once... was a captive.
made
     into
          a slave;

mastered by time...
bound...
        to
           the grave...

now...
    wild and free
    without a care
    dancing through life
    with no time...
                    to spare

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-04-16 09:15 PM

Very nice writing, shadydaze! I like this very much!

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

2 posted 2001-04-16 11:26 PM

I love the movement in this, and it touched on my life's basic aspiration, to be free of long worn chains.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-04-17 07:30 AM

How nice. To find freedom. Joyce

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

4 posted 2001-04-17 09:16 AM

Sounds like a bird who's found her wings..Good poem.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

5 posted 2001-04-17 11:26 AM

Freedom...we all so long for this, in one way or another...Lovely! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-04-19 06:58 AM

you expressed such thoughts succinctly..well done...a most enjoyable read

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