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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-04-13 06:25 PM


I'm walking down a familliar path,
That I've walked down so many times,
Only now its hard to find my way down,
Because I've been back so many times,

The same and only emotion followed though,
And it only seems to rain when I'm here,
Puddles illuminate neon light wash away fears only,
THere only seems to be pain when I'm here,

Blue is the colour I'm seeing on this path,
It is the colour of emotion when i'm feeling blue,
The tune of saxophone still follows me,
Why must the world be like this when I'm feeling blue.
  

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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coyote
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1 posted 2001-04-13 08:31 PM


Hey, Moondust.
Blue is also the color of a clear sky on a bright day.
Do what I do and play some music, and cheer up, O.K.?
Good feelings, Thanks.  

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

laryalee
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2 posted 2001-04-14 12:14 PM


Moon Dust,
Great atmosphere! The puddles, the saxophone...oh yeah, I've had the blues like this!  (They will pass)
Enjoyed it!
Lary

Wikket
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3 posted 2001-04-14 01:45 PM


Moon Dust:  Ah yes, the blues...  You describe your emotions so well here!  I hope that the rain stops falling soon, so you can run through the puddles, splash an unwary onlooker, and smile a little bit in the romp!  

~~Jamie

"There are no unlockable doors
There are no one winning the wars
There are no unrightable wrongs or unsinkable songs..."  --Ozzy

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2001-04-14 02:10 PM


Dear Moon Dust  There is sunshine around the corner.  A good poem, describing the bad times.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-15 12:08 PM


ah, yes blue....how wonderful

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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6 posted 2001-04-15 05:59 PM


Hope you are soon feeling sunnier, but a good description of how it is to have the "blues".

Betty Lou Hebert

Moon Dust
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7 posted 2001-04-16 06:03 PM


Thanks everyone, i'm ok now but thanks for all of your concern.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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