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Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2001-04-12 07:16 PM


She is There

Waking up wet and cold
early in the am, terrified.
Reaching out for comfort
and she is there.

Walking into a roomful
strangers staring, unknown.
Reaching for reinforcement
she takes my hand.

Watching a silly, sad movie
tears softly falling, stinging.
Reaching out for assurance
and she pats my arm.

Winking playfully, sexy
giving her that intimate smile.
Reaching out for loving
she kisses my lips.

Wearing all our many years
love in most every day.
Reaching out for comfort
and she is there.

the artist once upon...
        known as "bleeding"

© Copyright 2001 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
coyote
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

1 posted 2001-04-12 07:28 PM


Good one, Tramp.
Been there done that, it's real.
Thanks.  

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

Denise
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2 posted 2001-04-12 09:09 PM


This is sweet Daniel. Soft, warm and comforting, just as love should be.

Check your e-mail!


Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19
Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea
3 posted 2001-04-12 09:58 PM


What can i say?
I hope to be able to write such words one day. It gives me hope that someone can.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2001-04-12 10:00 PM


Lucky lady to have a poem like this written for her.  Joyce
Moon Dust
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5 posted 2001-04-13 06:55 PM


Yeah a very lucky lady you have there

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...
6 posted 2001-04-15 09:18 AM


lol hey Denise...done checked my email and
will write more later...
thanks for the comment!
kinda a barebones piece but warm and fuzzy, eh?
thanks to y'all for the imput
and comments...appreciate em!

the artist once upon...
        known as "bleeding"

helen smith
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7 posted 2001-04-15 06:14 PM


She's nice.I like her
Trillium
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8 posted 2001-04-15 06:26 PM


I guess this is what love is all about! Nice tribute to someone special!

Betty Lou Hebert

Suzanne Arlene
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Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2001-04-16 08:57 PM


Oh that was a sweet poem. Gives ya warm fuzzy's for sure     Suzanne
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