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shadydaze
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0 posted 2001-04-11 12:30 PM


I followed you
through lands of old
where kings reside
on thrones of gold

where mermaids bathe
in crystal lakes
and elves and fairies
merry-make

in magical forests
of trees so splendid
singing there songs
of cheer never-ending

where unicorns frolic
in boundless plains
and boisterous dwarf-children
play their dwarf games

beneath lazy, fat clouds
in the summer day's sky
where sprites flutter freely
and the pixies fly.

Yes, I chased you forever,
or so it did seem,
through a mystical world
of fantasies and dreams.

© Copyright 2001 shadydaze - All Rights Reserved
Wesley the Blue
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
1 posted 2001-04-11 01:35 PM


Wonderful romp through the always exciting fantacy world.

Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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Washington State
2 posted 2001-04-11 01:45 PM


I'd like to go along on that trip.  Next time?  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-04-11 05:46 PM


oooo, delightful fantasy world you've created here!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Red_Feather
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The Vagabond Sea
4 posted 2001-04-11 11:27 PM


Was the real fantasy your vision of the one you chased? Just curioius.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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5 posted 2001-04-12 05:39 PM


This is fun to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

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The Horsehead Nebula
6 posted 2001-04-12 07:23 PM


Wonderful!  if only i had dreams like that!  

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7 posted 2001-04-13 07:02 PM


A lovely fanitasy, good write.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


laryalee
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Alberta, Canada
8 posted 2001-04-14 12:24 PM


Cool fantasy, shadydaze - smooth rhythm and rhyme...thanks for taking us along!  
Lary

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