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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Warm breath, Gentle on my naked shoulders, Your hair, tickling my neck. As I turn in your arms To gaze at my angel, There’s a halo over your head. The stars in my darkness, Shine forever in your eyes. You make me something, Whenever I feel nothing. Hey guys.. sorry I haven't been here for so long!! I have been so busy, this year at school is so mch harder than I expected.. but I'll get there, hehe.. and the holidays are coming up soon, so I will have a little more time, hopefully, to drop in more often.. tho, I have 3 assignments I have to do.. Anyway, nice to be back.. and sorry I didn't get much of a chance to reply to all your poetry!! So.. umm.. what do u think of my "Stars"? Love, Lynne |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like this one Yu Lan. "You make me something, whenever I feel nothing". That is very good. Joyce |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very nice! I really liked the sound of this "Warm breath, Gentle on my naked shoulders, Your hair, tickling my neck." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Yu Lan: This presents a lovely image! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Fire extinguisher anyone! Liked the way this was ended as well.  |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Lynne - this is so gorgeous! "The stars in my darkness Shine forever in your eyes." Awesome! Lary |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Only love's "Stargazers" see a whole universe behind the eyes. Hopelessly romantic thoughts. My favorite kind. Thanks.  "The only thing new in the world, is the history we don't know." |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
The stars in my darkness, Shine forever in your eyes. oh I love these lines Maree |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you so much guys! ^_^ Aw, u r all so sweet.. yeah, I like the 'romatic kind of thoughts' too.. Thanx for reading.. glad you liked it..Love + Hugz, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
sometimes the only thing we need in the world is to be loved, and "stargazing" certainly does make one feel that way. Great work Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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