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last straw (tanka)

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2001-03-28 04:22 PM

just one straw
too many for tired camel
overload

tripped on a grain of sand
dromedary pedals air

LOL@me, do feel free to add on!

"Come...dance with me, into my world of words."

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

1 posted 2001-03-28 06:30 PM

This is cute. I have to think about it. Hope to be back soon.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-03-31 11:33 PM

Nicely done here.
Very fun!

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

3 posted 2001-04-01 09:15 AM

Okay, here's one.

Plethora of chefs
Each seasoning to his taste
Adding this and that
Each herb enhances flavor
But sum is inedible

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

4 posted 2001-04-01 05:46 PM

LOL, kcs...I love it! Thanks for the read dopey.

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