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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Beyond the cloudy days and cold, Behind each dreary view, My shining dreams were waiting And yearning to come true. I often thought there was no way I'd see them come to flower. I should have had more faith I know, It takes more than a shower To quench a flame that's fed by hope And breathed on with desire. Each opens like a lovely rose, Created by love's fire! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh, how lovely your poetry and welcome to this corner. Joyce |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
 What a warm and hopeful way to go off to bed! Hope your dreams come true.To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dreams are the elixir of youth..never stop dreaming...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
beautifully written. great theme. looking forward to more from you. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
The fire of love burns eternal, from the shelter of the heart. Very fine piece. Thanks. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very very nice. Loved the flow of it. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you everyone for reading and making such nice comments. This was my first post here and the welcome is rewarding. I've been posting on #13 and Spiritual Journeys. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
t takes more than a shower To quench a flame that's fed by hope And breathed on with desire. Each opens like a lovely rose, Created by love's fire! indeed it does, indeed it does. Beautiful once more Trillium, Maree |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thank you Maree! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
This is some poem! Yeah, I was a bit that way with my dreams.. I never really believed they'd ever come true, so I didn't like to dream so much.. but hey, half of them have come true now, and I am only 16! Now, I think, the moment a person stops dreaming, loses hope, faith.. that person's soul has died, and they are in dire need of a friend's help.. I'm so glad the poem ended the way it didLove Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Lynne: Thanks for your comments. Dreams are important in our lives I think. You have time on your side! Betty Lou Hebert |
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