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Lady Lost
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0 posted 2001-03-15 06:23 AM


Two moons alone with you
watching the calm bay
We trust our hearts to feel this alive
Sitting outside
The winter winds pull back their chill
In awe of our lust and passion
The world stands still...

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Yu Lan
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1 posted 2001-03-16 01:02 AM


This is beautiful.. how serene, and loving.. what a great read. ^_^

Moon Dust
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2 posted 2001-03-16 08:26 PM


Nice

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Dark Angel
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3 posted 2001-03-18 04:21 PM


So much said in so few words,
wonderful writing
I love it.

Maree


I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-18-2001).]

Dawn Eclipse
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4 posted 2001-03-18 09:51 PM


beautiful.. nothing else describes it.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
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*Cassandra Roseen*


silentsky
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5 posted 2001-03-22 01:32 PM


i thought this was really beautiful too, especially:
Two moons alone with you
watching the calm bay
We trust our hearts to feel this alive

theres a silence about it, and an aliveness. that is such a real feeling. really well written,
shira

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6 posted 2001-03-22 10:28 PM


Lovely! Really enjoyed it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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