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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-03-09 06:25 PM



Eyes Cemented

hazel eyes sweep over you
flushing my trembling body
I swallow my words
looking for life in your eyes

as I finger touch your face
reaching to lips, raising a smile
leaning in
kissing lips, nose, eyes

listening to your heart
each breath pounding in my ears
'til I can hear nothing
but their silent roar

rapt in the stillness,
statuesque
I cement my eyes to yours
and descend upon
your blue.


~Wynter/ve


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-09-2001).]

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2001-03-09 07:07 PM


nice decribes the moment well

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Dark Angel
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2 posted 2001-03-09 07:11 PM


rapt in the stillness,
statuesque
I cement my eyes to yours
and descend upon
your blue.


beautiful!

Maree


I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-09-2001).]

twilah
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3 posted 2001-03-09 09:08 PM


This is real nice....captures the feeling so well..... Twilah
jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
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4 posted 2001-03-09 10:37 PM


Lovely words to describe this feeling...Nice read.
JB

Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling!

Denise
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5 posted 2001-03-10 12:46 PM


This is breathtakingly beautiful, Maureen! Lovely!
Wikket
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6 posted 2001-03-14 06:43 PM


Ahhhhhh...zzzzz moment! You have captured it so well in this marvelous piece! Bravo!

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2001-03-16 02:26 PM


MoonDust
Dark Angel,Twilah,JB, Denise, Wikket
thank you all for reading and your responses
huggzz

Maureen/Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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