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Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
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Small Town, Somewhere

0 posted 2001-03-07 07:16 PM


Hearing your voice
Speaking your name
Not seeing you around
Causes bitter-sweet pain

Reaching out for you
Your no longer near
Loneliness creeps in
Blink back a tear

Looking at the calender
Still counting every hour
One day circled in red
Stands out like a tower

Soon to be re-united
Friends together at last
Then this heart-broken sorrow
Will be a thing of the past


*Hee Hee*   I couldn't resist... Though not quite marked on the calender, I'm still counting the days until I'll be able to chat with all of my on-line friends   again.  Until then I miss all of you   and your in my thoughts and prayers...Take care.    Always, Me.  BWA

Your time is here.  Take one last look at it, then never come back.  This part of your life is already over...




[This message has been edited by Broken_Winged_Angel (edited 03-07-2001).]

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Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

1 posted 2001-03-07 07:47 PM


This is so lovely! Wonderfully written, it flows so well.


....beth

A Mused Cupid
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 19
A comfortable place
2 posted 2001-03-07 11:34 PM


I could feel the sadness you exhibit through this poem, having friends to lean on whether right next door or online can make one feel much happier. I hope the days pass quickly for you so that you are reunited with those special people.
jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
Posts 74
Australia
3 posted 2001-03-08 06:25 AM


Nice read...thank you

JB

Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling!

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
4 posted 2001-03-08 11:24 AM


Well BWA, I'm glad you're on your way back to us...I was beginning to worry about you! Anyways, I shall await your return and hold a seat at the Pub's Bar for ya! hehehehe

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

5 posted 2001-03-08 04:27 PM


* spins round on his barstool happily...*

No worries hun..you can have it back ..I is just keepin it warm for ya *G*

Sol


~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

Moon Dust
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6 posted 2001-03-10 10:19 AM


Loved this

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


Denise
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7 posted 2001-03-10 12:49 PM


Ahhh, this is sweet, BWA!
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
8 posted 2001-03-11 11:56 PM


Like the rest, I am counting the days until you're return. :-) Nice one, sweetie.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kaile
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singapore
9 posted 2001-03-12 03:15 AM


this put a smile on my face..i do agree with you...we always snatch every opportunity to spend time here with our loved ones at passions, don't we....

you take care and i will be waiting for your return too

Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
10 posted 2001-03-13 03:51 PM


Just wanted to say I liked this work! Don't worry, time flies, and we're not going anywhere.
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