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twilah
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since 2000-09-25

Posts 91
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-03-06 07:58 PM

Looking out the window at the snow
That is so beautifully floating down
As a ruptured feather pillow very
Quickly covering the ground,

I feel his arm around my shoulder..
Feel his warm breath on my cheek;
I look into his soft blue eyes, being
Spellbound as I hear him speak.

His voice so deep and tender now
Whispers of his love so true;
As he holds me close, I respond
Repeating his words..I love you.

The snow is quickly deepening now
As inside, our love is deepening too,
Feeling each others heightening desires.
Releasing emotion so long overdue.

The fireplace displays its flickering glow
As if dancing for our mutual pleasure;
We come together in silence now, our
Passion mingling with hidden treasure.

We love the night away, not wanting
To see the dawn of a new day appear;
I turn to the one I love, as he gently
Kisses my eyelids..holds me ever so near.

We whisper about the love we share
Each sharing what’s in our heart;
The time was approaching, we both knew
When we’d say farewell..and depart.

But for now, I lie closer to him,
Feeling the beating of his heart;
Knowing it beats for me alone,
Whether near..or miles apart.

As we leave our cabin with saddened
Hearts, we vow to return one day,
Our love demands it of us now..
To be together in every way.

Wikket
Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA

1 posted 2001-03-07 07:17 AM

Well twilah...I think you beat out my 'Morning Light' by a few yards with this masterpiece! Gracious me! Makes me long to be with my fiance again!!!

Great work!

~~Jamie

I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

twilah
Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 91
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-03-07 07:42 AM

Thank you Jamie.....I guess yesterday was "that" sort of day....

Twilah..

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2001-03-07 05:42 PM

yep every little memory is cherished and enjoyed reading this one

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

A Mused Cupid
Junior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 19
A comfortable place

4 posted 2001-03-07 11:18 PM

I love this poem, it's so romantic and written so well. Made me dream of being snowed in somewhere with that special someone.

jbaker
Member

since 2001-02-16

Posts 74
Australia

5 posted 2001-03-08 06:29 AM

Although it doesn't snow here where I am, but I am looking forward to the coming winter months, as I believe couples become closer in winter.All those cuddles on cold nights! A lovely subject to write about. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
JB

Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling!

twilah
Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 91
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-03-08 06:35 AM

Moondust...A mused Cupid.....JB

Thank you so much for your comments..wintery days do have that way of bringing people closer.....

) Twilah

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2001-03-09 12:07 PM

you have warmed a long winter . . .

Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

8 posted 2001-03-09 08:09 AM

ooooooo...I like it...* grumbles because now he has to take back allhis wishes for spring....*

tis a wonderful poem...so clear a picture in the mind..excellent

Sol

~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~

Author Unknown..well at least to me..:)

twilah
Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 91
Maine, USA

9 posted 2001-03-09 08:40 AM

Thank you, krawdad, for your comment..what better way to warm a winter???

)

Thank you Sol, for your very complimentary comment....please dont take back your views on Spring.....it is my favorite time of year and I am sure I can find "things" to do then, also...lol Twilah

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

10 posted 2001-03-09 10:57 AM

Your use of imagery creates a vivid picture.
This was awesome! Very tender piece that I enjoyed immensely.

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-03-09 06:45 PM

a very tender piece. I love those big snowstorms that keep everyone in...allowing for peaceful wonderful moments *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

twilah
Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 91
Maine, USA

12 posted 2001-03-09 06:51 PM

Thank you, Whtdove..for your very nice comment....I appreciate your words...

Wynter (like that name) yes..seems that when we are boxed in by snow....we can spend more time on other things....

) Thank you for your comment... Twilah

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

13 posted 2001-03-10 12:57 PM

Very beautiful, Twilah! Lovely!

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