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Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-03-06 10:16 AM


The Promise of Spring,
Once again obscured
By winters hash cloak,
So much we've endured.

The migrating birds,
Returning for Spring,
Are also offended
By Winters fierce sting.

How long lie we fallow
"Fore the rebirth begin,
Resurrect to New Life,
Spring secure once again?

With Winters' last gasps,
May Spring now be true,
Forsake we our slumber,
Begin Life anew!

3-6-2001



© Copyright 2001 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2001-03-06 11:00 AM


Deep thoughts. We all can start fresh.
Melton

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-03-06 06:28 PM


I'm awaiting the warmth of Spring too, nice thoughts Dennis

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
3 posted 2001-03-07 07:26 AM


Yes yes...where is Spring?! Goodness...it's too darn cold for the month of March!!! heehhe....nice thoughts in this one! Great work!

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
4 posted 2001-03-07 05:38 PM


Nice thoughts, i'm thinking much the same, Good work.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


A Mused Cupid
Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19
A comfortable place
5 posted 2001-03-08 12:08 PM


Oh yes, the taste of spring in the air to renew our spirits. Never quite thought of it like so but you just planted thoughts to ponder. Great writing and may the warmth arrive for you soon.
laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
6 posted 2001-03-08 09:28 PM


This has such a nice, brisk feel to it, Dennis...like a spring breeze!
Lary

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