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2dalimit
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0 posted 2001-03-04 10:05 AM


Family, Work, Play, Sing
He always did the right thing
He endured Life’s pain

His complete Passing
Child, Man, to his ripe Old Age
Father paid his dues.


[This message has been edited by 2dalimit (edited 03-04-2001).]

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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
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The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2001-03-05 04:30 PM


Nicely said. it's always good when people do things like that.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Celeste
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2 posted 2001-03-05 09:54 PM


I ponder......a full circle?

"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

2dalimit
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3 posted 2001-03-06 07:26 AM


D/E Thank you. He was a good man, Oct 3rd , 1919 – Feb 8th, 2001.

DK My intent, exactly. Thanks.


I wouldn't have seen it, if I hadn't of believed it.



A Mused Cupid
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since 2001-03-07
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A comfortable place
4 posted 2001-03-08 12:36 PM


I think he paid his dues with happiness too, seeing he had someone special like you to understand and honor him. Great job writing this, I think it shines as bright as the memories you have of him.
jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
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5 posted 2001-03-08 04:40 AM


What a wonderfull little piece expressing the love of your Father.No doubt he will be sadly missed.

JB

Smile and the whole world smiles with you. Keep smiling!

2dalimit
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6 posted 2001-03-08 05:21 AM


A Mused Cupid - Thank you. His principles shaped me into the man I am today. He paid his way and did not expect anyone else do so.

JB - Yes, I am missing him, now. Thank you for reading.

Dopey Dope
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7 posted 2001-03-12 01:38 PM


I liked this. Short and quite nice.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
8 posted 2001-03-15 11:53 AM


Thanks, DD
Melton

pegasus111
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9 posted 2001-03-21 04:55 PM


a wonderful tribute Melton. I fear my dad may not have much time left and I feel the same way. thank you.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



coyote
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since 2001-03-17
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10 posted 2001-03-21 08:20 PM


In the doings of ordinary lives,
there is more often greatness,
than in the published eye,
what we deem famous.

William S.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
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Presque Isle, ME
11 posted 2001-03-22 12:32 PM


I am sorry for your loss, Melton. You have paid him a fine and fitting tribute in few words.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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12 posted 2001-03-22 06:39 AM


pegasus111, My prayers are with you. Thanks.

billy, True words. Thanks

Marilyn, Thank you.

Melton

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