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Romy
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since 2000-05-28
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Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2001-02-28 08:51 AM


I am a mother a driver,
a teacher, a nurse,
a poet still yearning
to write better verse.

I’m a passionate fool,
a dreamer, a tease,
a little too shy,
too willing to please.

I am playful, cynical,
thoughtful and rude,
I am silly and fun
(when I’m in the right mood)

I might not be right,
but I’ll never be wrong,
my life is as full,
as the days are long.



© Copyright 2001 Deborah L. Carter - All Rights Reserved
Celeste
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1 posted 2001-02-28 09:25 AM


I loved this! Am so glad I caught it! Your honesty in it and the way you've included all parts of yourself is wonderful.
Am keeping!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

Romy
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2 posted 2001-02-28 12:14 PM


Thanks Dreamkeeper! Fun little challenge line! Thanks for giving my muse a kick!
Debbie

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3 posted 2001-02-28 06:41 PM


A New challege i'm off to check it out.
I don't know the challegne but I like this

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.


laryalee
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4 posted 2001-02-28 11:23 PM


This is just so cute - very open and honest - and done with great flair!
Lary

kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2001-02-28 11:54 PM


You are also a writer of lovely words. I don't know the challenge, but this poem is definitely a success.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Romy
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6 posted 2001-03-01 11:42 AM


Moondust,
There are some great phrases being circulated in the poetry challenge section! I haven't come up with any of my own but have found several that I'd like to try!

Lary,
Thanks! I had fun writing it!

Marilyn,
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement!

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7 posted 2001-03-02 08:43 PM


it looks like you are capitalising on your sense of humour here...enjoyed this funky read, especially the last two lines
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