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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-02-26 11:59 AM


I want you suffer
I want you naked
I want you make me
Reach down and take it

Just like no other
can, how you fake it
For no mistake see
Thats when I break it

I am, I am your man tonight
I will I can't be home tonight
You see, but you know not
Your sight
I am, I am your man tonight

I want you sustain
I want you reveal
Your heart one black stain
In all that you feel

I need you tell me
Who's this you cry for
These lines they sell me
Those lies you'll die for

Cursing the darkness at your door
Falling to scabbed knees on your floor
You pray, but you know not
What for
Cursing the darkness at your door

I am, I am your man tonight
I will I can't be home tonight
You see, but you know not
Your sight
I am, I am your man tonight

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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
1 posted 2001-02-27 12:41 PM


WHB,
My soul sings at this. Finally someone has the courage to tell it like it is. Great read!
Alicia

Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
2 posted 2001-02-27 03:27 PM


Thanks, Alicia
My soul sang it out, I'm glad yours piped in! Its always good to put out something a little raw, little angry, little lustful, just a little left-sided once in a while. Thanks for responding!

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3 posted 2001-03-01 01:57 PM


I liked this one a lot. Nicely done here again.......I am a fan!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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