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jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
Posts 74
Australia

0 posted 2001-02-21 05:28 PM



Full moon high in the night sky
lights up so all can see
Falling star drifting by
make a wish for me.

Twinkling stars high above
like thousands of gems
My only wish is for love
to all, even the little wrens.

© Copyright 2001 Jocelyn Baker - All Rights Reserved
kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
1 posted 2001-02-21 11:06 PM


Pretty wishes, and I had to smile at including even the little wrens. (You should know I am a bird watcher.) Very nice of you to spread the wishes around, and I thank you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-02-22 07:44 AM


Jos; This is soooo sweet!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2001-02-22 08:15 AM




When you wish upon a star makes no difference who you are...

you do bring this song to mind with this dreamy poem.
Well done!
Deb

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
4 posted 2001-02-22 10:10 AM


Very dreamy...I can't count the number of times I've wished for love upon a star. Thanks for forcing me to remember...gonna have to pay those stars back!

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

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5 posted 2001-02-22 07:22 PM


Hehe lovely, made some wishes up there my self

~Maria~


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