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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Oh.. I'm disappointed..  I didn't realise I couldn't post in the Poetry Workshop.. well, i wrote this for one of the exercises there.. I'm not particularly experienced with writing love poetry.. but.. umm... yeah..I Have You To Hold You Dreaming of passions, Deep in the night, Whispered words holding The stars in the sky. Sweet butterfly kisses and giggling, Darkness delights As you're holding me tight; You know I love you tonight. Walking together Through garden and bomb site, Loving you always, Your hand in mine. My comfort is knowing I don't need to dream. I have you to hold you, My dreams are just air. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
yes..much better to hold a real person than elusive dreams..nicely done..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Sigh....this is deliciously romantic... A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Very nice!  Deb |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Lynne, this is so lovely! I'm glad you decided to post it here. Can't beat the real thing, for sure! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
Lovely....words true to my heart.Seems you're a bit of a 'softie' like me. JB |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this one ~Maria~ |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
you did a fine job on your homework. Bet ya get an A Suzanne |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thank you so much, all of you! Aw, you guys are all so nice..  Hehe, yeah jabaker.. I guess I am. And dreams just aren't the same.. thank you.. Love ya'll.. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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