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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-02-20 09:10 PM



~Lemon Spring~

Yellow daffodils
bake in springs tender oven
warm as lemon pie

BloomingRose

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-02-20 09:25 PM


Sounds absolutely delicious!! Very nice, Deb!
kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-02-20 10:45 PM


Mmmmmmm! What a nice simile here!

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Yu Lan
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3 posted 2001-02-21 01:32 AM


Yum. Lemon flavoured daffodils.. you know, this is really good.. it says everything about spring, in 3 short lines.. and paints a beautiful picture, that I wouldn't mind stepping into right now.. it's simply delicious..



Luv,
Lynne

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pegasus111
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4 posted 2001-02-21 01:46 AM


It is already spring here in Fla as you know..lovely haiku.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-02-21 06:38 AM


Most lovely! in God's kitchen of seasons, I do so love spring!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

jbaker
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6 posted 2001-02-21 06:46 AM


What a lovely combination....spring, daffodils and lemon pie....yum yum!

JB

BloomingRose
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7 posted 2001-02-21 08:33 AM



Denise~ Thank you. Guess you are ready to bake that lemon pie?

Ksc~ Thank you

Lynne~ Now I'm ready for some lemon pie!
There goes the diet. Oh well...
Thank you, glad you enjoyed.

ellie~ The Lord does provide! Yes he does.
His awesome display of flowers are about to burst on the scene.

pegasus~ Yes, spring is about to bloom. You are just around the bend from Jacksonville, so we are experiancing the same warm weather. Can't wait for flowers!
Thank's for you warm reply

JB~ Now I'm starved, must be the weather.
So glad you like this.


I am pretending all these smilies are lemon pies since I am on a diet



Dopey Dope
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8 posted 2001-02-21 05:43 PM


Very nicely done.......I'm hungry now!



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I admire it daily

Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-02-21 09:58 PM



I love this! This is really creative. You're making me hungry for lemon pies, and I can't wait until Spring!

Take care,
Melissa~

Songbird
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10 posted 2001-02-22 12:54 PM


I will look at my daffadils a little differently tomorrow, I might even smell lemon pie! Really like this!

[This message has been edited by Songbird (edited 02-22-2001).]

BloomingRose
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11 posted 2001-02-22 07:53 AM



Dopey~ Thank you much!

Melissa~ Ok, so lets get to baking!

songbird~ ahhhhh those lemon yellow daffodils Thank you



Moon Dust
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12 posted 2001-02-22 07:40 PM


ooooh gave me a all-over warm feeling that did

~Maria~


VAS
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13 posted 2001-02-23 10:51 PM


Fantastic!!! Blooming Rose you've colored my Friday a glorious yellow.
Temptress
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14 posted 2001-02-26 09:17 PM


WOW! This is what I find with the search shovel. Do you mind if we use this in the next Newsletter?
BloomingRose
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15 posted 2001-02-26 10:04 PM


Moon Dust~ Thank you. Does it kinda make you want to bake a warm lemon pie? If so let me know, I'll be the first in line! This diet is getting to me now

Vas~ So glad you like this

Temptress~ Thank you so much! So glad you like this enough to use it



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