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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-02-19 09:10 AM


I am a poetic garden
where four roses bloom,
sending fragrance of poetry,
to enchant the every sense.
Do not come here at all.
if your mind be on baser things.
for unless you see the soul,
of the beauty that is within,
you will not know the essence,
of the wonder of their gifts.

So come to me, this garden,
have your heart so refreshed.
Gaze upon these gifted four.
Hear their enchanted words.
Be transformed in beauty,
and renew your weary soul.




[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 02-19-2001).]

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-02-19 09:20 AM


this is so very lovely..nice one, Ellie..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-02-19 11:01 AM


Wow Elles...

this is great...it was a garden wasn't it?

I feel honoured to have met you dear...and I will be back rest assured...

Lovely writing my new-found friend...

K


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

Wikket
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
3 posted 2001-02-19 11:15 AM


Again Ellie, Again! Your work has touched me and taken my breath away! Goodness, the places of which you speak. Makes me long for the days I can have my own 'poetic garden' to spend my days! Grand!

~~Jamie


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-02-19 11:55 AM


Oh, I'm jealous. Can I just be a little weed over the corner, please please?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2001-02-19 06:48 PM


Ooooooh if only this was in March!!!!!!! Sounds like a great time for all of you.... what a great "garden" it must be. Bonnie
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
6 posted 2001-02-19 08:13 PM


Ellie this is so pretty.
You my dear are a garden of poetry. Ever blooming, full of love and life!
Hugs,
Deb

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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7 posted 2001-02-19 10:16 PM


Very beautiful, Ellie!! Soft and lovely!!
I went in and did some editing. If you need to make any more changes, try it now. I saved it to my computer if it disappears again!

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