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William P Bussey
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since 2000-02-26
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0 posted 2001-02-16 10:22 AM


The darkness is like a cover, seemingly to hide the ugleness of day,
But instead of comfort, it brings uncertainty and fear, some say.
It is not strange that we feel this way, for the blackness of the night,
Hides from us the sights we need to see, to show us all is right.

Why do we fear the blackness? is it an unconscious fear of death?
The sounds of the night are different, some will cause quickness of breath,
The man in a foxhole, he knows this feeling so well, he hates the night,
Though it covers him and gives him comfort, it also magnifies his plight.

The simple rustle of leaves means more than that to him, is it near?
The sound of death comes in many forms, it is wise to fear.
Though it is unsettling, it is a survival instinct, it brings senses high,
Self preservation, this is the common bond between you and I.

It sometimes takes years to chase the night demons from a mind,
The toll war takes on a man is found in many forms, all unkind.
But the fear of the blackness of night is the one I have to fight,
It has been half a century, and I still find comfort in the days light.

Will this burden ever lift? I think not, but I have made my peace,
I accept the fact that the unsettling sounds of night will never cease.
I remember times when the night seemed to never end, yet it always did,
With morning light I saw all those fears that the darkness had hid.

So I take comfort that, as in the past, these nights will surely go,
And now when I wake and look about, I"ll see things I know.
No longer do I have to fear another mans desire to take my life,
I now can wake and see, can feel the warmth, of my sleeping wife.

© Copyright 2001 William P Bussey - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-02-16 10:52 AM


this is a great piece..the fear of the unknown, especially in harm's way, can be overwhelming. I am glad to hear that you have come to an understanding with your personal demons. some never do. peace, my brother in arms.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
2 posted 2001-02-16 12:02 PM


this is yet another wonderful post from that great guy that puts so much emotion into everything he writes. great read, william!
ALicia

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2001-02-16 05:54 PM


I like this, especially the last stanza. I have never been in a war, but do prefer light to darkness. I think perhaps it is something that is born in us, perhaps a yearning for a greater light. Anyway, this was a nice exploration of your feelings and the reasons for them. Thanks for sharing it.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2001-02-17 07:09 AM


much wisdom here, so lovely that you have comfort and solace in your beloved. I have chosen the Light of the world, He dispels all darkness and fear.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2001-02-19 02:43 PM


Everyone has their own fears and everyone finds comfort int heir own way too....you expressed this so well....

Best

NC
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since 2001-02-20
Posts 89

6 posted 2001-02-20 08:51 PM


the wars continue
in the mind's of the men
who fought in them

meaningful poem, and very well done

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