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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2001-02-15 11:25 AM


To appreciate this one, may I suggest you first read or re-read my previous post called One-of-a-Kind Valentine. Thank you.

............................
And then I woke up
All the stores were closed,
I'm in deep hockey puck
And this I well knows!!
Oh if only, it worked THAT way,
(Oh how I hate Valentine's Day!!!)

But the dream, was Fantastic!!!



David




No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!




[This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 02-15-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
laryalee
Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2001-02-15 11:36 AM


Hee hee! A dilly - and works well in two parts...
troll the bait, then set the hook!
Good job, David!
Lary

blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
2 posted 2001-02-15 12:28 PM


lol david!

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2001-02-15 12:37 PM


too much, David..lol

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2001-02-15 05:46 PM


good one, now the only sensible thing to do is go back to sleep....and have that valentine dream...part 2!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kcsgrandma
Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
5 posted 2001-02-15 11:37 PM


Well, I have to admit cards and gifts are not unwelcome, but still think your original one of a kind was the perfect Valentine. Maybe Ellie has the right idea. Just go back to sleep. LOL

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
6 posted 2001-02-16 09:18 PM


I knew it!!!!!
My husband read my comment to your first one, and said I wasn't being nice. Can't wait for him to get home to read this one.

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
7 posted 2001-02-19 02:29 PM


*LOL* *psssst* need a shovel?

Best

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