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Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
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0 posted 2001-02-14 10:38 AM


The memories are all
edged like lace
Fragile and delicate
A beautiful pattern of love
Mine, even if it's only that
Just memories to touch gently
here and there
When I need to reflect on
tender threads of love
Pure white
Mine always
in my heart




To capture and live a moment is truly living


© Copyright 2001 Celeste - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-02-14 05:43 PM


dreamy, romantic..great piece.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-02-14 06:10 PM


Sigh....lovely and romantic

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
3 posted 2001-02-14 07:51 PM


Very lovely, as delicate as the lace itself, and as perfect.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

4 posted 2001-02-14 09:55 PM


Thank you so much everyone for reading and commenting.

To capture and live a moment is truly living


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2001-02-14 11:59 PM


very sweet...very soft...

i like

hugs, g


"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

laryalee
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 352
Alberta, Canada
6 posted 2001-02-15 11:49 AM


This holds such purity and gentleness - what a lovely design!
Lary

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
7 posted 2001-02-19 01:46 PM


*sigh* So very gentle and sweet....

Best

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
8 posted 2001-02-19 09:06 PM


This is a very beautifuly written poem. So tender and delicate, just like the lace that surrounds the heart. The imagery is very vivid.
I will have to add this one to my library.
Deb

Sven
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9 posted 2001-06-14 12:51 PM


this speaks wonderfully. . . so tender and delicate. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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