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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
A life of darkness Crying out in vain For someone to help… To ease my pain. Drowning in tears Hiding from fears Never knowing when To be whole again. A candle in the darkness It shows me the way It chases away the shadows And calls my name. Just one light in the darkness Just one path for me to take A risk at stake A transition to make. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
"And if everyone lit just one little candle, what a bright world it would be." Nice thoughts. Follow the light. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very good piece..and I agree..follow the light. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hope! One candle dispels the darkness! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Simpily beautiful.....gentle and a candlelight of hope at the end. Wonderful writing! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
"Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you." You have a way with words when you wish to, excelent work Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Lovely thought - we all need a candle! I hope yours will continue to shine - and light a path towards fulfillment... Lary |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
What a bright world it would be, indeed...wonderful job..... Best  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful, but sad. The key here is the hope I read in your last verse. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Just one light in the darkness Just one path for me to take A risk at stake A transition to make ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The light of hope will light the way. Keep searching, your heart will soon open to a new and brighter day. Hugs, Deb |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
A wonderfully dark piece. Speaks very strongly, and is written wonderfully. Don't lose sight of that light. may true peace find you where you are. ~Alison~ "Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear." |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Wow...an excellent read. BTW did you get the title from 'Candle on the Water'?  **No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.** ~a_little_girl |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thank you all for your replies! Actually, no i didn't get my title from "candle on the water" it just kinda jumped into my head. Thank you all so much! "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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jbaker Member
since 2001-02-16
Posts 74Australia |
lovely poem...Keep them coming. JB |
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