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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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As darkness falls over the city's towers, clear sky declines into dusky shifting shadows. Solemn evensong advances with failing light, obscure sky rhythms plucks last golden ray of sight. With distant shaded sun in a rush to meet the horizon, colors of today's world bleed into tomorrow's black and white, endless flow from within to without. A hush moment of breathless time, then the giants of color step forth trailing streamers of shaded brilliance, as they solemnly stride into evening's tide. -wordancer "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is so lovely, Wordancer! You have drawn me into the scene as few people ever do. Hats off to you! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
wonderful description of a glorious sunset.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
wonderful feelings of beauty you capture so well with your magic of words! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
evening's tide. ahh just have to love the images....hmmm wonderful ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Thank-you all for your ever so lovely comments. This was an interpretation of a dream my daughter had last year. I told her someday it would be a poem...and now it is. WO |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Wow! That's amazing how you can take a dream and make it into such a vivid poem. I have a hard time putting my dreams into words. They're so fuzzy!  Joy |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Wordancer, what amazing imagery - truly an original painting, and how glorious! "then the giants of color step forth trailing streamers of shaded brilliance, as they solemnly stride into evening's tide." Love it immensely! Lary |
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