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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Can She Have This Dance? Heartaches etched deeply within a soul, Tracing outlines in hues of dark dismay, No glitz even seen from twinkling stars, Depriving oneself of life’s brighter stroll. As a friend she shines brighter than stars, The sparkle gleams when happiness is met, Like opening an oyster to find that pearl, Pure as destinies reign amongst the stars. With a magic wand her drama to create, Just a simple twirl or two under lights, A casual would you please hand in hand, Than others in tune could possibly relate. Here is radiance needing a touch of glitter, Just a moment of ones energetic appeal, A true act of random healing kindness, Which would be a positive transmitter. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What empathy you have shown here! Indeed, a little act of kindness might open up a treasure to the giver. I like your rhyme scheme, too.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
So magical! "Pure as destinies reign amongst the stars." I really like that line! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, the beauty of a heart who knows the depths and heights of love shines forth in every word! Exquisite! Love to you my friend...Ellie  A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is very beautiful! |
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