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DawnG
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0 posted 2001-02-10 08:39 PM


I wrote this for a special friend of mine. Hope you all enjoy.
____________________________________________________


Happiness surrounds me when we’re together,
A friendship like ours I’ve never known,
Packaged within two hearts love blooms,
Painting a beautiful picture of two friends,
Yapping the night away.

Vainly I had wandered,
Around this earth so large,
Looking for a friend,
Emptiness no longer fills my heart,
New challenges daily you do impart,
Time now has meaning,
Insecurities almost gone,
Never to come back again,
Every time we part
Secure in knowing our friendships strong.

Daily I know you more,
A true gift you’ve given me,
You.
© 2001 DawnG – All Rights Reserved



[This message has been edited by DawnG (edited 02-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Dawn - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-02-10 08:58 PM


this is lovely, Dawn..great job..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2001-02-10 11:06 PM


What a beautiful gift you give back!     He should be very pleased with this.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-02-11 01:54 AM


Dawn; this is a beautiful acrostic! What a wonderful friend you are! love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
4 posted 2001-02-11 10:21 PM


Very sweet and very nicely done.  A lovely present for a friend.

WO

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2001-02-12 05:00 AM


I love it--it is a beautiful Valentine and will be treasures no doubt by your special friend!
        David


No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
6 posted 2001-02-12 08:22 AM


You did such a nice job on this acrostic!
This is a nice tribute to good friends!

bestgirl911
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since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
7 posted 2001-02-12 03:02 PM


A wonderfully romantic Valentine! and great acrostic.

Best

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