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Wesley the Blue
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0 posted 2001-02-04 05:48 PM



Captured and enraptured by the pull
A little bit more is all I crave
Seems I can never get enough
Slowly falling a little harder
I couldn’t stop if I wanted to
Everything seems so much better now


Keith W. Mullin

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

© Copyright 2001 Keith W. Mullin - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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1 posted 2001-02-04 07:46 PM


ahh, my friend. is there any such thing as "a little bit more" of that which we crave? no matter the object of our desire, what we have is never enough.  don't you agree?

kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-02-04 11:34 PM


Hmmm, you have me curious now.  Not what I think?  You certainly are describing something that has a hold on you.  Narcotic implies sleep to me.  Resisting the alarm clock?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Wesley the Blue
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3 posted 2001-02-05 12:16 PM


Thank you both for reading.
Pegasus- no, there is nothing that is just a "little bit more" which is kinda what I was trying to say.

kcs-a narcotic is an addictive drug, but thats not what Im talking about here.  Ill give you a hint though, its contained within the poem.  Good luck.

Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

Mr. Nice112
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4 posted 2001-02-05 12:30 PM


Well if i could take a stab at it. I would say your a roller coaster freak! You love the thrill... your body bein thrown around by the G force,and the narcotic thing about it is , like a drug so addictive... You want more... Well how i do .. close or not even!?

All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

Wesley the Blue
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5 posted 2001-02-05 12:44 PM


nope sorry, not even close.  Thanks for reading though.

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
6 posted 2001-02-05 08:07 PM


So you have fell in love with Cassie.
It is a great feeling isn't it?
Nice Accrostic!

Denise
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7 posted 2001-02-05 08:58 PM


Very good!! Yep, yep, yep, I knew....Cassie!!
Songbird
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8 posted 2001-02-06 10:11 PM


This made me smile especially after discovering what it was really about. Best wishes to you, hope it all ends up well, and you don't need NA!
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