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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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alas camelot does thou knowest that thee were a dream magic kingdom drifts into dark times a lady weeps thy banners wilted under skies of scorn dark clouds gather oh, avalon where have thou gone a vision lost amber sky frozen in a endless dream the dragon sleeps awake! beat thy wings loudly. . .and scream defiance bellow loudly awaken thy defenders to arms a clarion call glorious camelot no longer will thy enemies tread on thee "Come...dance with me, into my world of words." [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, wordancer! I enjoyed this! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
lovely as usual, oh master of the haiku..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This is so expertly woven - I didn't even realize it was haiku! The story gripped me. Enjoyed immensely! Lary |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I'm with Lary, missed that it was haiku until it was pointed out. :-) Nice. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
haiku? ah, these are haiku, actually the 2nd stanza was the first...it was posted as a lone haiku elsewhere. Then when I look at the responses ... it just grew into this. (I love it when that happens) Glad you enjoyed, it was fun writing. WO [This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Wonderful writing, Wordancer...You are so talented! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is a real beauty, very clever, I love tales of camelot~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoyed your story in this form. It projects an image for each individual. Melton |
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