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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
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The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2001-01-31 06:33 PM



I have often dreamed
of a far off place
where my hopes and beliefs
would suddenly come true.

where my heart would fly,
and I'd never have to cry,
and in this place
my dreams would sail by

Somehow I'll find my way,
to this place of dreams,
It doesn't matter how far,
I know somehow I must try.

I know every trial
will be worth my while
I would do most anything
to find where my dreams belong.


**got some ideas from a movie, so i give disney credit for whatever they wish. sorry if it's unclear, i haven't written in while.  


"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


© Copyright 2001 Cassandra Roseen - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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1 posted 2001-01-31 08:01 PM


Well, that place sounds like Paradise to me. Don't think we'll ever experience it this side of eternity. Our trials do strengthen us, though, making us better able to deal with whatever comes our way. Good poem! I enjoyed this!

Denise

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-02-01 07:25 AM


dreamers are very special people..they tend to be more sensitive..poets are dreamers, God bless em'....well done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA
3 posted 2001-02-01 05:02 PM


Follow your dreams, Cassie, and follow your heart.  No matter where they take you, they will never lead you wrong.
Keith

every day is a new day with which we can change the world

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-02-02 01:56 AM



This is well expressed and a dream many would love to discover. Yes, always be true to your heart and your intuition. If only I could find my way there...

Take care,
Melissa~

Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25
Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass
5 posted 2001-02-05 12:32 PM


John Steinbeck once wrote, "We spend our time searching for security, and when we find it, we hate it." I think often we don't appreciate the paradise we have in just living. Make your own happiness. Oh, and I hate to sound over zealous but if I had to name the place you just described, I would call it... Heaven?

Beautifully written once again.



"Close your eyes, and you'll see."

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