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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2001-01-30 04:48 PM




So called anyway
Much not heard
what we say
Couldn't repeat it now
Just another user

You were gone yesterday
Haven't seen
Mustn't stay
They couldn't track you down
Common abuser

Worried on for today
Couldn't speak
Had to pray
He wouldn't listen now
Higher confuser

So much puppet play
Missed a step
Went a'stray
Whos left to tell it now
Lifes little loser

So long happy day
We're all gone
And everyday
We'll all be thankful for
Just another user

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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
1 posted 2001-01-31 09:25 PM


Wonderful poem.  it puts an interesting perspective for life into my mind.  Thanks for the read!

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
2 posted 2001-02-01 07:19 AM


a quick peek at the banality of everyday life..nicely done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA
3 posted 2001-02-01 02:38 PM


Thank you both for responding!  
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2001-02-03 01:42 PM


I thought this was great. I liked the style very much. nicely written!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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