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blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-01-29 12:09 PM



I feel trapped
Not secluded
But surrounded
Coming up to see
People all around me
Not denied
More like surrounded
I know I can't get away
From this large crowd
Ideas and thoughts
Are all I fear
Crowding my mind
Surrounded
Am I trapped?
NOt quite
I'm surrounded
I have to get away
From this black abyss
Of hate and fear
Go to a world of
Peace and love
Happiness is all I want
Can't you see it
I'm surrounded
Satan is breathing
Down my back
SOmeone please turn on the light
Take away this darkness
And leave me alone
Cuz I feel so surrounded
Surrounded by the darkness
SUrrounded by my fear
Surrounded by little demons
Prancing with hate
How do I deal with it
I don't
I leave it alone
TO go away on it's own
Cuz I don't want to be
Surrounded
Please go away
I need the light
TO comfort me
SO I'll no longer be
Surrounded

© Copyright 2001 Alicia R - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2001-01-29 04:23 PM


all closed in and nowhere to go..been there..don't think it will happen on it's own though..needs a push from you..a leap of faith?

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
2 posted 2001-01-29 06:39 PM


Ah Know the feeling.

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-01-30 08:15 AM


Keep your eyes on the Light of His Love, it always dispels the darkness! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Mr. Nice112
Junior Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 26

4 posted 2001-01-30 07:13 PM


  I thank u for my vote of confadence... i agree with what u and how u say it.. to all that agree, please say wee..

i didnt get ur poem in the email .. please send it...


All i ask in life is a beautiful woman to love, and a little sip of faygo too... MCL

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
5 posted 2001-01-31 06:56 PM


Wonderfully put.  Sometimes, things just move in so fast that they try to suffocate you.  Wonderfully written.  thanks for the read.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


blackhalo
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467
Denver, CO
6 posted 2001-02-09 12:22 PM


Mr. Nice,
Thought I had sent it, will try again though!
Thanks guys, nice to know someone else has been there...
Alicia

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