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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-01-27 03:08 AM


tell me, tell me, tell me now...
I could do again somehow?
tell me, tell me, tell me then...
I could do again, AGAIN...
If this were but a paint of sand,
somehow, I would understand,
and blow the flow and all be damned
to start a slow sift all again.

oh, but, every bit of sand,
has a thousand cutting edge...
and everything I understand?
lies tempting, too close, to the ledge...

tell me, tell me, tell me true,
I could? Could I? Be with you...
tell me, tell me, lie again--
and tell me, you're my only friend.
Every breath I have is yours,
treacherous, still--beg for more...
lick my lips, lies evermore...
I'll wish....I'll wish...
I wish again...

I wish for you....wish, evermore...

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-01-27 10:29 AM


IWIHWT....

I really do....


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
2 posted 2001-01-27 11:16 AM


We always come back for more, don't we?  Nice writing.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-01-27 09:36 PM


Every breath I have is yours,


hmmmm yes I know how that feels
such a very intense poem Sis
I could feel the desire

enjoyed it very much

Maree  

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