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Untouched work in progress

blackhalo
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since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

0 posted 2001-01-25 01:15 PM

Brillant waterfalls
Endlessly gracing
The moss-covered rocks
With the presence of water

Toothless smiles
Spreading around the room
And the beaming blue
Of this baby's eyes

Rolling hills
Reflect sunlight
And shining greens
Of the never ending grass

a work in progress, njoy

"Hope is no stronger than the tremulous beads of dew strung on the filament of spiderweb, and it alone can't long support the terrible weight of an an

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

1 posted 2001-01-25 07:26 PM

Mmm.. such descriptions Alicia!

Can't wait to see the finished product.. =}
certainly did njoy it..
Lynne

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2001-01-25 09:01 PM

This is beautiful, Alicia! Great title too! The work is ever on-going!!

Denise

kcsgrandma
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME

3 posted 2001-01-25 11:10 PM

I especially loved the toothless smiles. Do we get to see more of this?

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-28 12:59 PM

Alicia~
You're on to something beautiful here.
I greatly enjoyed this.
Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

5 posted 2001-01-28 09:33 PM

The world is a work in progress isn't it?
We people are.

Joy

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

6 posted 2001-01-29 09:31 AM

Wonderful title befitting a great poem.
Work in progress...beautiful things are ever changing.
Simply wonderfully written!!!
More of this please.
*thanx*

mYsTiC

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2001-01-29 04:29 PM

great piece..looking forward to more..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2001-01-29 06:35 PM

Definianatly a work in progress, love this

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