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Another when, Another where (Death to an alter-ego)
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Empty loving sorrow Bring to me my pain Lasting many on the morrow Sing to me my bane The love you bring To unfit hands Can no longer sing In barren lands Empty as my heart Invites the hurt But I must depart Into cleaner dirt Bring to me my pain And with a smile I'll suffer Sing to me in vain The tear shall make me tougher Empty loving confine Shed my tear Wet thy lips devine Cleanse my fear The love I give So corroded I dare you live Half cocked and loaded Empty is my word To coax you in But you must've heard Another where, Another when Bring to me in time A smile to fill my void Sing to me with rhyme What I must have once enjoyed |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sad, WHB, very sad. Denise |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Sounds like a lot of mixed emotions in this one. Nice way to write them out. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Denise--->Sad indeed..  Marilyn-->Ever closed your eyes, ears, and mind?...Just to write whatever came first? Thats what happened here, the message I got across...but the scheme needs lots o' work I think. Thanks for reading and responding guys! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great I loved the line where you plugged in the title. Great one here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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