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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2001-01-22 08:51 PM


As I walk though the open doors,
The pub cheer hits my face,
I settle down upon the bar stool,
Amonsgt friendly faces,
Both familar and new,
The music blasting my favorite tune,
Yet I have one complaint to make,
Why is there no barman in here?


When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.



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Songbird
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1 posted 2001-01-22 10:00 PM


Maybe cause the drinks are free, and no needs to worry about driving home intoxicated even tho we may get that way in here from the intoxicating spirit of the place. cute poem. Cheers
Denise
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2 posted 2001-01-22 10:11 PM


I'm one of the barmaids, Maria! What can I get for you?  

Denise

Wikket
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3 posted 2001-01-22 11:08 PM


I've asked myself the same question now and then...     No worries, we all get served sooner or later!  Nice poetry!  

~~Jamie    


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2001-01-23 01:30 AM


   Good question, Maria.  I can't imagine why I didn't notice that.  Very cute poem!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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5 posted 2001-01-23 06:20 AM


Cause the barmaids are all called "Poets" and they only serve up intoxicating poetry, like this one you just wrote! Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2001-01-24 05:10 AM


because this barman was busy behind in the background trying to fine-tune his tossing-the-bottles skills

glad to serve you now

Moon Dust
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7 posted 2001-01-24 02:38 PM


oh so we do have a barman okay i'm happy now
bestgirl911
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8 posted 2001-01-25 03:12 PM


Maria....

A drink for you....   \_/ ...enjoy....if you need anything else let me know... *smiles*

Ranea

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9 posted 2001-01-25 07:34 PM


^_^ So cute Maria.. well, we are all barmen/maids here.. and I think we are all a little drunk.. *_^ err.. got a hangover.. think I have to cut down on the poetry..
Enjoyed muchly!  
-Lynne

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10 posted 2001-01-26 08:30 PM


Yu Lan - Ah I see yeah I know waht you mean tho I cant even remeber last night.

Bestgirl - Okay I'll have whatever ellie is having

When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it.


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