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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa 
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Blazing fire warms deep winter’s chill, the lady sits, eyes closed, quite still, while shadows dance on darkened wall, logs crackling sounds throughout the hall, the flakes fall soundlessly without, the howling wind an angry shout, windows shuttered before the gale, rattle and grate a mournful tale, a twisted tale, and not so new, befell this lonely lady who, serenely dressed in blue this night, lost true love of faithful knight, in battle struck a fatal blow, red stains upon the pure white snow, blue silk tied snug upon his wrist, cold snowflakes his still face do kiss, she feels the chill and softly moans, the pain drives deep to aching bones, his memory a searing flame, a faceless enemy to blame, weep softly now my lady blue, for one who can’t return to you, the nights record the brutal plight, of lady blue who lost her knight. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
This is a wonderful poem. Its constructed with a grace and composure befiting the lady of blue. every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh Pegasus, another beautiful poem floated from your pen... |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Oh, you are truly a master of poetic storytelling! soooo vivid! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Beautiful--captivating. Nicely written. Gene |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
oh, the poor lovely Lady Blue, now so alone. Well told my friend. -wordance |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I do like this style and you tell the story so well.  When freedom wisphers your name, it's time to fight for it. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You write so vividly, Pegasus! I am quite impressed. And I shed a tear for the lady. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thanks to all who responded..your positive words are much appreciated.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Pegasus... How beautiful this is....you never cease to amaze me with your enchanting words..... Ranea |
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