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kcsgrandma
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0 posted 2001-01-21 10:55 PM


Diverse Poetic Gifts


I may not write your poem or your song.
It is not yours to pen the things I do.
'Tis arrogance to call each other wrong
Because I do not think the same as you.
The gifts we have will never be the same.
Diversity brings richness to the earth.
Variety in technique or in fame
Does not mean that we differ in our worth.

Each thought must find its poet who will write
In ways that other people never can.
Each gift is given to someone to light
The path ahead to guide his fellow man.
The form is immaterial to the art.
Our goal is for the thought to reach a heart.




© Copyright 2001 Marilyn Gordon - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2001-01-22 12:16 PM


Marilyn; This is lovely and I couldn't agree with you more, that's why there's chocolate and vanilla!  Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

bestgirl911
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2 posted 2001-01-22 09:48 AM


KC...

I agree the world would be a boring place if we all expressed ourselves the same way & had the same opinions, alas, the diversity is what makes for interesting conversation.
wonderfully expressed here.

Ranea

Gene
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3 posted 2001-01-22 12:20 PM


Marilyn,
There are infinite ways to say the same thing, but each is new for me. You expressed this beautifully.

Gene

pegasus111
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4 posted 2001-01-22 03:27 PM


very well said, Marilyn

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


Wikket
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5 posted 2001-01-22 11:06 PM


kcsgrandma...you are so right!  So right indeed!  This was great...so empowering!  I think I'll go write some more!  

~~Jamie      


I mean the opposite of what I say. You've got it now? No, it's the other way. ~Bruce Bennett

kcsgrandma
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6 posted 2001-01-23 01:27 AM


Ellie - Thank you.     Chocolate and vanilla, eh?  May I have a scoop of each?

Ranea - Thank you.  I wrote this for two friends, both fine poets who write from the heart, but feel inferior because they don't know a lot about form.

Gene - Thank you.  What you say is true.  If it weren't, there would be no more poems to write, would there?

Pegasus - Thank you.

Wikket - Thanks!  Write on!  It was my hope to empower.     

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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7 posted 2001-01-23 12:50 PM


Variety is the spice of life, is my motto, and I think it applies to poetry as well. This is one of your best, in my humble opinion.
Denise
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8 posted 2001-01-23 09:53 PM


This is great, Marilyn! Different strokes for different folks!

Denise

kcsgrandma
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9 posted 2001-01-23 11:58 PM


Songbird - Thank you very much!     I like your "humble opinion".

Denise - Yes, exactly.  Thank you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kcsgrandma
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10 posted 2001-01-23 11:58 PM


Songbird - Thank you very much!     I like your "humble opinion".

Denise - Yes, exactly.  Thank you.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kaile
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11 posted 2001-01-24 04:59 AM


kcs, im feeling insecure about my writing of late and i must say reading this makes me feel that my effects are well spent...

Each thought must find its poet who will write
In ways that other people never can

thank you

kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME
12 posted 2001-01-24 10:56 PM


Kaile - Thanks.   You picked out my favorite lines.  I see no need for you to feel insecure.  You have been posting some good stuff. Keep it up.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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